tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23675574.post7701406750131535479..comments2023-06-17T11:11:34.180+01:00Comments on Old Testament Space Opera: CSFF Blog Tour: Something Else by Robin ParrishUKStevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01608166612209106788noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23675574.post-7618677281731766732009-08-19T20:04:27.566+01:002009-08-19T20:04:27.566+01:00I'm glad it wasn't just me then Rachel! It...I'm glad it wasn't just me then Rachel! It's a shame really that the bad points were quite so memorable, as you say, the pace and plot more than made up for them.UKStevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01608166612209106788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23675574.post-57780286286494340032009-08-19T18:16:55.080+01:002009-08-19T18:16:55.080+01:00I was wondering when someone else might comment on...I was wondering when someone else might comment on the editing! I haven't read "Merciless," but "Offworld" had a few screamers. A petite young woman "piling" out of an SUV, a raging river "stampeding" down the street, and sentences that just really needed tightening up. The amazing thing was that even with flawed writing, the book sucked me in. Tribute to great pacing and an intriguing plot!Rachel Starr Thomsonhttp://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/inklings/noreply@blogger.com